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Day 8

  • Writer: ~I
    ~I
  • Apr 8, 2020
  • 1 min read

Prompt: On this day, we were asked to use a line from another poet's work as the seed for our own. I chose a line from John Dryden's "When I consider life", where he wrote, "When I consider life, 'tis all a cheat."


The Promise of Life


When I consider life, 'tis all a cheat,

The illusion of control, obsolete.

Existence precedes essence,

Mortality, morality, life lessons

While bathed in despair,

In a battle of purpose,

this poet wonders and asks a question,

When did life promise anything?

Did life agree to health, wealth and a reason for being?

All one can say is life promised life

Not absent of sickness, poverty or strife

We define, we desire and we deprive

Yet blame life for keeping us alive...




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ofnousenumber1
Apr 12, 2020

A contemporaries outlook into the promise life gives to us..

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ofnousenumber1
Apr 12, 2020

This is basically what we should expect from life

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dipiya.02
Apr 12, 2020

Sounds like opinions from a sceptic philosopher

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dipiya.02
Apr 12, 2020

'tis incredible 🖤

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